The build up of the first two scenes, then the restraint you use in not over doing the final scene works really well. Jokn's understandable frustration and an oblivious, then hurt Sherlock comes across clearly , I love your descriptions of a hyper-talkative Sherlock-very in character.
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Date: 2012-10-14 06:46 am (UTC)The build up of the first two scenes, then the restraint you use in not over doing the final scene works really well. Jokn's understandable frustration and an oblivious, then hurt Sherlock comes across clearly , I love your descriptions of a hyper-talkative Sherlock-very in character.
Thank you very much for posting this, Ma'am:-)