I was convinced it was watson until the building part, because John six month later was still living in221b
And then the last part was disconcerting, i read it again and no sens at all until i read the comments and i reread it and think the part of his thoughts of Mary, because Sherlock would never thought that of her, he would thought she was dull and he was better with him thinking on cases
But i think the sister thing is maybe too much, you could put sibiling so you misleed anyway and it could be a brother in the end
But i love it because i always thought that Moran and John are the other side of a mirror like Sherlock and Moriarty are.
So both John and colonel Moran are loyal to their mad men, they really need them when they came into their lifes... And they both will equally grieve them as a widow, because there is no one who can be like Moriarty, no one like Sherlock, how can you possible replace that especially in a crack shot adrenalin addict, Loyal soldiers needing of porpuse, of war and broken in a world were no one would possible understand them, until Sherlock and Moriarty were the solace the lifeline of this two men.
And i really like the idea of Moran wanting to date Mary Morstan in steed of John, maybe he won't want to marry her, but i understand the same appeal for him
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Date: 2012-08-16 09:35 am (UTC)And then the last part was disconcerting, i read it again and no sens at all until i read the comments and i reread it and think the part of his thoughts of Mary, because Sherlock would never thought that of her, he would thought she was dull and he was better with him thinking on cases
But i think the sister thing is maybe too much, you could put sibiling so you misleed anyway and it could be a brother in the end
But i love it because i always thought that Moran and John are the other side of a mirror like Sherlock and Moriarty are.
So both John and colonel Moran are loyal to their mad men, they really need them when they came into their lifes... And they both will equally grieve them as a widow, because there is no one who can be like Moriarty, no one like Sherlock, how can you possible replace that especially in a crack shot adrenalin addict, Loyal soldiers needing of porpuse, of war and broken in a world were no one would possible understand them, until Sherlock and Moriarty were the solace the lifeline of this two men.
And i really like the idea of Moran wanting to date Mary Morstan in steed of John, maybe he won't want to marry her, but i understand the same appeal for him
This was brilliant
What is the wip?
Now i want to read it!!