Hi, thanks for commenting. The fact that you rarely comment, and that you were thinking about this for an hour afterwards are signs that I did do something right ;)
Yes, the blog posting is indeed being done by the sniper (in my headcanon, Moran).
You have a very good point about making the parallels between John and Moran more subtle; I agree that that would probably improve upon the story, perhaps making it more believable and delivering more of an impact at the end. I'm always happy to receive hints that would improve my writing.
Thank you for providing a link to weather conditions; perhaps I'll change it a bit so that it's the dampness rather than the cold that John has difficulty with.
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Date: 2012-08-16 12:44 am (UTC)Yes, the blog posting is indeed being done by the sniper (in my headcanon, Moran).
You have a very good point about making the parallels between John and Moran more subtle; I agree that that would probably improve upon the story, perhaps making it more believable and delivering more of an impact at the end. I'm always happy to receive hints that would improve my writing.
Thank you for providing a link to weather conditions; perhaps I'll change it a bit so that it's the dampness rather than the cold that John has difficulty with.