I quite like this. Especially this: He desperately missed the guiding hand, the prompting to say thank you ('Just say it'), the whisper of 'a bit not good' in his ear ('Maybe don't do the smiling. Kidnapped children?'). The process of him becoming a good man had stuttered to a halt, with no promise of it ever starting up again. Especially if he remained on his own for much longer.
and this: He was here to take back his conductor of light.
Such a fabulous last line! I'm anxious to see what happens next!
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Date: 2012-06-14 10:22 am (UTC)He desperately missed the guiding hand, the prompting to say thank you ('Just say it'), the whisper of 'a bit not good' in his ear ('Maybe don't do the smiling. Kidnapped children?'). The process of him becoming a good man had stuttered to a halt, with no promise of it ever starting up again. Especially if he remained on his own for much longer.
and this:
He was here to take back his conductor of light.
Such a fabulous last line! I'm anxious to see what happens next!