ext_55097 ([identity profile] melodywilde.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] pipmer1 2012-08-15 12:26 pm (UTC)

I second the previous comment--that was a brilliant and totally unexpected ending! I went back to read it twice more, just to appreciate what an excellent job you'd done in the misdirection. Thanks for sharing!
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